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Bug 355584 - Minor errors in reference documentation (up to and including Chapter 4)
Summary: Minor errors in reference documentation (up to and including Chapter 4)
Status: CLOSED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Gemini.Blueprint
Classification: RT
Component: Core (show other bugs)
Version: unspecified   Edit
Hardware: All All
: P3 trivial (vote)
Target Milestone: 2.0.0.M01   Edit
Assignee: Glyn Normington CLA
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Reported: 2011-08-23 19:41 EDT by Andrew Swan CLA
Modified: 2012-11-26 08:24 EST (History)
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Description Andrew Swan CLA 2011-08-23 19:41:34 EDT 
Preface:
* "Spring Framework powerful" -> "Spring Framework's powerful"
* "modularity of OSGi platform" -> "modularity of the OSGi platform"

Chapter 1:
* "SpringSource contributed Spring Dynamic Modules" -> "SpringSource contributed the Spring Dynamic Modules"
* "remained the same" -> "remain the same"

Chapter 3:
* "binaries requires" -> "binaries require"
* "and above" -> "or above" (twice)

Chapter 4:
* "straight forward" -> "straightforward"
* "resource abstract or" -> "resource abstraction and"
* "has about the Spring" -> "has about Spring"
* "she will pick Gemini" -> "one will pick up Gemini"
* "looking for an advice" -> "looking for advice"
* "Spring DM previous forum" -> "previous Spring DM forum"
Comment 1 Glyn Normington CLA 2012-11-26 08:24:13 EST 
Thanks Andrew. Fixed in 024b27f6a67496ed9491a181e38483d232f89d35.